I found this flash fiction nugget (your choice if it’s more like a chicken nugget or a gold nugget) while looking through my older Distant Horizon Universe newsletters. I originally sent this out on February 20th of 2020.
Since I’ve been having fun with flash fiction and poetry lately, I thought it might be fun to revisit now.
This little shorty doesn’t follow a particular character, but does take inspiration from both Distant Horizon and Deceived. 🙂
Students mill around her. Chatting. Heading to class. Nothing new.
But this place is a lie.
It’s that poster by the door that reminds her. Stark white with pale blue lettering.
Safety
Security
Efficiency
Her throat squeezes and she can barely breathe.
Lie-lie-lie…
A firm hand clamps on her shoulder. Soldier-agent-danger–
She recoils and her shoulder slams the wall, knocking aside the poster. She needs to hide–
“Woah, it’s just me.” A young man smiles at her, confusion in his eyes. “I didn’t mean to startle you.”
She knows him. Knew him.
He doesn’t know her. Not anymore.
Still, she forces a smile and rights the poster on the wall. She can’t afford to lose the efficiency points. “Sorry. I guess I was thinking too hard about which building has my next class.”
Her heart pounds like a student slamming the walls of a transformation chamber.
“You weren’t gone that long.” He chuckles. “Which Community did you visit, anyway? We thought you’d failed the scan.”
It’s hard to maintain her smile. “I visited the European Community.”
A lie like those words on that poster.
“Neat. Maybe I’ll get to go sometime. See you around.” He waves as he reenters the stream of students filtering through the hall. “The Community is safe!”
She can’t muster the enthusiasm to say the usual response.
She never went to Europe.
She never knew where they sent her when she failed the scan.
But she found her way back.
They’re going to wish she hadn’t.
One of the things I enjoy about flash fiction is the questions they spawn, and the possible stories. 🙂
Who is she? Will she succeed in getting vengeance? What in particular does she want vengeance for?
Seeing as how she failed the scan, what are her powers?
Why, and how, did she make it back to the Community?
I didn’t have those answers when I first wrote it and I still don’t have them now… but it’s still a fun exercise.
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Jenna and Galina both see the Community in new light after an unfortunate visit to a transformation facility…


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Happy reading and writing!

























