Designing the cover for The Restless Sands of Neel

Like many of my cover designs, especially my designs using Daz renders, the design for The Restless Sands of Neel had a major shift from the first iteration to the final.

Sometimes the title changes, too! Originally I was going to call the novella, The Dragon in the Desert.

But, after feedback from newsletter subscribers, I was worried it might disappoint readers looking for a more typical dragon.

Ro’nor, the protagonist, might have descended from dragons, but he doesn’t have wings or any of their special powers, and he can’t shift into their form. The biggest creature we see in the story is a monstrous pit worm.

So… after a bunch of brainstorming, deliberating, and tweaking words to see what else might work, I finally settled on:

The Restless Sands of Neel

Anyhow, here’s a look at the first proof I made for the cover:

There were some changes I already planned to make: a different set of robes/shirt, maybe a different hair once I double-checked what was stated in the story, possibly a different coat pattern for the horse to make sure it’s consistent with the story, and the final touch-ups to make it look like a polished cover.

I sent this out, along with the tentative title, to the newsletter, and several readers chimed in with their thoughts and suggestions. (Much appreciated!)

As a result, I ended up making some major changes, two based on making it more accurate to the novella (the horse’s coat color and the main character’s hair style), and I did a bit of work to make it more dynamic and personal (a common problem of mine, for some reason).

And so I ended up with this for the final version of the cover:

What do you think? Did the changes work in its favor?

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Read The Restless Sands of Neel and see how a (sort-of) dragon fairs against a giant pit worm…

The Restless Sands of Neel Book Cover

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Happy reading and writing! 📚

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The Early Renders of Tim Zaytsev

Meet Tim Zaytsev, the Legion Spore’s external organic operating system!

(Tim would cringe so hard at that. The Legion Spore, and its successor the Manticore, are airships made from the bodies of shapeshifters forced to merge with technology. In theory, the resulting ships are supposed to be a blank slate. Instead, memories of the people who were tied into the ship cause destructive glitches, which Tim has been hired to find and purge).

Once, many years ago (because I’ve been combing through my old newsletters to find stuff I think is interesting enough to yoink and place here in this blog) I took a shot at using Daz Studio to create a figure who would represent Tim from The Glitch Saga. This was still pretty early in my attempts to use Daz Studio, and my asset library was a bit smaller to work with, so it took a few tries before I successfully made a design I was truly happy with.

I wanted to tie the render in with a quote from the book, so I picked a snippet from Spirits of a Glitch, the third book of the series.

Tim is dealing with the Manticore (who has a much harsher personality than the airship you see in Whispers in the Code):

So easily distracted. Surely you see the flaw?

I groan in exasperation. “Where is this other glitch?” Right now there’s nothing but an arrogant machine who keeps messing with my attempts to correctly program it.

The vessel sighs. The glitch belongs to our external organic operating system.

“You don’t have a—”

You, Master Zaytsev. You are our external organic operating system.

A render of a young man looking nervously over his shoulder.

I wasn’t quite happy with this render… I wanted to switch the hair to something closer to how I pictured Tim’s hair, and I wanted to make him look a bit younger (I’m aiming for 18-19 years old).

(Also, I’m absolutely terrible at judging age in real life, let alone in renders).

Later, I took another shot at Tim’s design. For this version, I changed the hair I was using (I was thrilled that the hair I wanted to use for him went on sale almost immediately when I started eyeing it), and I did some work to his facial structure to make him look a bit younger.

A close-up portrait of a somber young man looking off camera.

There were still a few tweaks I wanted to do before calling it final (the back of his jaw/cheek was still too sunken in and the hair wasn’t quite sitting properly around his forehead), but overall, I was pretty happy with this variation.

I’m pretty sure I made a few more adjustments later, but I don’t think I have a fully rendered image with those adjustments. So, for today, we’ll focus on the early renders of the Legion Spore’s external organic operating system. 😉

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Read the tragic downfall of Tim Zaytsev as he navigates the perils of the Legion Spore…

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Happy reading and writing!

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A failed gryphon design inspired a short story

The second Legends of Cirena short story I released was called The Gryphon and the Mountain Bear.

And so I figured it would be a good idea to feature a gryphon on the cover.

Now, I create most of my own covers via photomanipulation or through Daz Studio renders (“The Singing Coil” was the exception, being illustrated via ink and Photoshop). But, sometimes, when you try to create a gryphon… the gryphon decides to be disagreeable.

And this was before I had discovered Daz Studio.

Sometimes you try to photomanip a gryphon, and you don’t end up creating a gryphon.

Like… what is this guy? I like him, but he’s definitely not a gryphon.

Needless to say, I had to take a different approach for that cover. However, the experiment did result in an idea for a new creature that can be found in the Immortal Realm, a strange owl-cougar-human-looking hybrid called an armansee.

And so this fellow flew his way into a short story I was planning to write but hadn’t fully plotted yet, one which would eventually be called A Path of Swords and Feathers.

I knew I wanted to write a story featuring Daernan’s father and the adventures he went on after he left Daernan and his wife behind to follow the demands of the goddess he serves. And with this strange creature as inspiration (and with me listening to a lot of filk–fictional folk–songs), the plot for A Path of Swords and Feathers came into being.

Now, whether this immortal is foe or friend… 

Well, you’ll just have to read the story if you want to find out. 😉

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Want mystical, immortal creatures in your short story reads? How about one of these two stories?

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Happy reading and writing! 📚

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Monthly Book Promotion Highlight

Today I have two fantasy ebook promos for you!

This month’s promos include the Free Fantasy & SciFi ebook promo and the March Fantasy & Sci-Fi Freebies ebook promo!

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Enjoy the magic of the Wishing Blade universe? You might like some of these free ebooks!

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Fantasy & Sci-Fi March Freebies Ebook Promo

Free Fantasy & SciFi Ebook Promo

(Note: The giveaways above are hosted through BookFunnel. Authors will usually ask for your email address, and in many cases, the author will collect these addresses for their newsletters.)

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I hope you find a good book! 😀

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Where’d we get the inspiration for Spectator?

Many years ago, while Isaac and I were enjoying Applebee’s 25 cent wing special (do they do that anymore?) and getting some studying done, we had the joy of running into someone who had read one of our books and seen us at the local comic con.

(*Squee! Recognition!*) ☺️

Anyway, that was awesome.

But during our conversation, one of the things the reader mentioned was wondering a bit more about the gamemaster guy and the sea monster he threw at the protagonists toward the end of Distant Horizon, and whether or not there’d be more about him in the next book.

(Spoiler… there is. His name is Spectator, and he plays the role of a minor antagonist in Fractured Skies, and gets a couple mentions in Starless Night. He also makes a brief appearance in Initiated.)

The conversation got me thinking more about that character and his role in the Distant Horizon universe. Isaac and I have gone back and forth into how much of a role he should play (with me usually wanting to give Spectator a bigger role and Isaac wanting to scale him back… mostly because Spectator has a tendency to interfere with overarching plot points or become deus ex machina. His scenes have gone through a lot of revisions).

Granted, part of the deus ex machina problem might be because that was his original role in the game.

See… I had a tendency to make some not-great decisions for Jenna in the role-play game Isaac and I were playing, and I’d kinda-maybe-sorta gotten her captured by the bad guys with no explainable hope of escape in what was supposed to be a one-shot campaign.

That I very much wanted to see continue because I had questions and I wanted answers.

So Isaac snagged a character from one of my previous campaigns in the same world (but modern day), upgraded that character to Spectator status, and decided this newfound “Spectator” was going to make sure the game continued (see “fourthwalling,” below).

So Spectator does a bit of timey-wimey/alternate reality manipulation to make sure certain events can now happen, and the last scene of the one shot campaign got a teensy update.

And Jenna’s team is now able to come to her rescue.

(And we did a ton of work in the novels to make sure his involvement makes sense and doesn’t read quite so deus ex machina-y.)

And once we’d done a bit more work, we determined that Spectator is kind of like the “Q” of the Distant Horizon Universe (Q from Star Trek, for those not familiar). Spectator is not quite omnipotent but close, well aware of things he shouldn’t be, and mischievous. He can put just about any character who knows who he is on edge. He’s a reality bender, capable of changing the world around him to suit his whims, at least to an extent, and he’s also a fourthwaller, meaning he believes he’s part of game world of sorts, and thanks to his insight, he can break through the walls of that world.

Within the Distant Horizon universe there is a cult of fourthwallers who believe their world is controlled by two gamemasters, and that, in order to maintain their existence, they must be as interesting as possible to hold the attention of those gamemasters. Unfortunately, this means that if they lock in on somebody they think is a “player character,” they’ll cause them worlds of trouble in an attempt to stay in the gamemaster’s focus.

That’s all fairly meta, though, and most of the characters simply try to avoid fourthwallers when possible, dismissing them as crazy. Jenna, having come from the Community, has no idea these people exist until Spectator shows up. The rest of the rebels, once they realize he’s a fourthwaller and getting involved, are quick to research everything they can about him… all while trying to keep mysterious artifacts (the ones that lead to the sea monster showing up during Distant Horizon— it actually wasn’t Spectator’s fault) out of the hands of their rivals.

Spectator’s role in the story is explained more in Fractured Skies, so I’m going to avoid delving too much into that since that would be spoilers. But I hope you find him as interesting as I do.😁

Eventually, more will be revealed about the role of reality benders and fourthwallers, a trope I have readily enjoyed both in shows like Star Trek, involving Q, and in superhero stories, like X-Men.

Long story short, Isaac and I are both fans of Star Trek (For me, Voyager was long my favorite, though my first experience came from Next Generation, but Lower Decks now might be my favorite among the series, followed pretty close by Strange New Worlds).

Next Generation, however, introduced me to one of my favorite Star Trek characters: Q.

He’s such a fun character, especially paired against straight-laced Jean Luc Picard. It also helps that the actor who plays Q, John de Lancie, is pretty cool, too. (At least from what I’ve seen of him).

Fun fact, if you ever watch the My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic series (which has some surprisingly great nods to science fiction, fantasy, and various social themes you might not expect), Discord (a chaotic character of that series) is played by John de Lancie. The show’s writers wanted to get someone who could pull off a Q-like character. The people in charge of casting decided, why not ask the original actor, just in case? According to one of his interviews, he was a bit surprised, but went ahead and agreed to the role… meaning that a few iconic references to Q from Star Trek landed in MLP.

Also, the actor was one of my favorite panelists at a Star Trek convention I went to when I was in high school, and he was really friendly at answering my teen self’s questions about acting and directing. Plus, he can direct a pretty good radio play (I had the fortune of seeing that in college).

All righty… I digress. 

Point is, I think Q is a cool character, so of course that made its way into characters I enjoy writing.

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See how the meddlesome Spectator gets involved in the Distant Horizon universe…

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That time I tried testing a different cover for Magic’s Stealing

As much as I loved the old cover for Magic’s Stealing, there was a time when I wasn’t sure it conveyed the genre well.

So I decided to test a new design that I made in Daz, one which focused on Toranih instead of Shevanlagiy.

I only changed the ebook edition, but I left it up on Amazon a few weeks to see how it went. The idea was that, depending on the response, I’d either switch back to the old design, or swap the the other ebook covers to match the new design and upload those across all retailers.

Regardless, I planned to keep the print covers matching the older design until the series was complete, that way anyone who had already picked up print copies could still get a complete collection. (Plus I have ideas in mind for those covers).

I’d say this was kind of in my middle-ground stage of working with Daz. Not quite as rough as early attempts, but I still didn’t have quite as good of a grasp on the program. Here’s a look at a 3D rendering I made of Toranih, the precursor to creating the newer edition of the cover:

I did end up making a few changes to her between this picture and the design of the cover, but at the time that was about how I pictured her.

The results?

Well, I left the cover up for a month, and I didn’t see a noticeable difference in sales.

However, I also didn’t have a chance to do as much with Amazon ads as I would have like to have tested, so I might not have had the best comparison to work from.

Eventually I switched it back to the original cover, since I still liked that one better. Someday I may try to update the ebook cover again, once I have a better baseline set up and a more well-thought-out plan for advertising, but for now, I think I’ll stick to the original.

What do you think?

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Read the YA fantasy series where magic gets stolen, and one of the only two people who still have magic is a young woman who can’t see it and doesn’t trust it…

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Happy reading and writing (and book cover designing)! 📚

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✨ ~ What is Cozy Sci-Fi?

So you’ve heard of Legends & Lattes, the self-proclaimed novel of “High fantasy and low stakes” that absolutely lives up to the hype. (And will make you really, really want a cinnamon roll and a cup of coffee).

Perfect book for cozying up on the couch or under a heated blanket on a snow day. Today would be a perfect day for it, considering the gusting snow outside. ❄️

(I have recently discovered the wonder of heated blankets and I don’t know why I didn’t latch onto them sooner. They are amazing when you live in an apartment where the heater can’t quite keep up when temperatures dip below the teens.)

Anyway, cozy fantasy has wrapped the fantasy world in heated blanket fashion, and the new-ish genre is pretty easy to spot on the bookshelf.

But what about cozy sci-fi?

I recently realized that cozy sci-fi exists, and, unfortunately, isn’t nearly as popular. (Yet).

But it does exist, and I’m about to make a few recommendations to prove it.

For me, cozy sci-fi leans on the same premise as cozy fantasy. Sci-fi trappings in this case, or maybe even science fantasy trappings, but low stakes. Your main characters aren’t out to save the world. Their stakes are more personal, more local, more community based. You’re likely to see the found family trope in spades, especially delightfully, unabashedly queer found family, a growing connection to community, and the process of building, or rebuilding. Things are smaller (cafes and bookshops instead of corporate empires, towns instead of countries), and there’s a strong sense of comfort.

There’s also usually tasty treats and good food, brought about by community effort.

It is, as the name says, cozy.

With that in mind, a cozy sci-fi should leave you with warm feelings, satisfaction, and a sense of being safe.

Now, I’d say there is a spectrum on which cozy sci-fi rests, some books being cozier than others. To explain that, let’s get into my recommendations!

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A Psalm for the Wild-Built Book Cover

#1. A Psalm for the Wild-Built by Becky Chambers – This is the epitome for cozy sci-fi.

The world is genuinely beautiful, hopeful, nature-focused and any war and strife is long gone. The stakes come from a restless tea monk who has everything they need but can’t figure out what they’re still missing in life.

It’s thoughtful (meet the wild-built robots who want to understand what humans want), poetic (lovely descriptions), and slow, but in a peaceful way rather than a struggle to read.

(Be warned… there is one scene in which the tea monk first starts their new job and gets blindsided when they try to help someone having a terrible time of it, and if you’ve recently lost a beloved pet and/or are going through a breakup with a long-time partner, maybe wait a little to read this one. It’s a short scene, and it serves a solid purpose, but it blindsided me as much as it did the monk.)

I’d put A Psalm for the Wild-Built as solidly cozy sci-fi.

Automatic Noodle Book Cover

#2 Automatic Noodle by Annalee Newitz – This one hits many of the cozy sci-fi marks while being a little more fast-paced.

A group of robots have built a found family and decide to open a noodle shop in order to stay afloat after coming online again after a major war. While we see the aftermath of the war (and the resulting trauma), and there’s plenty of commentary on late-stage capitalism, human/robot rights, the acidity of trolling, and the importance of community, the overall feeling from this book is about strengthening friendships and building something good even amidst messy life.

Compared to A Psalm for the Wild-Built, Automatic Noodle has more bite. But it still feels solidly cozy as the robots figure out how to piece together their new noodle shop, forge scrappy alliances, and make delicious food. (You will crave noodles while reading this book. I craved noodles just writing about this book. Noodles got made for lunch).

Their stakes are a bit higher, but still extremely personal. Cozy sci-fi but faster paced.

All Systems Red Book Cover

#3 All Systems Red by Martha Wells – This one is cozy-adjacent rather than cozy.

A lot more action (we’re dealing with a self-proclaimed murderbot acting as security, after all), and more of a focus on survival as a murderbot tries to keep its crew alive on a hostile planet, but… this same murderbot really just wants to lock itself in its bunk and watch soap operas all day.

Meanwhile, its crew is determined to make it feel like part of the family. And because of all that, somehow, this book just feels… comfy. A quick read, but it still leaves you feeling cozy and satisfied at the end.

So it’s not technically a cozy sci-fi, but it still meets many of the feelings that you get from the genre, which is why I recommend it.

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Those are all novellas, too, so they’re quick, satisfying reads you can enjoy over a couple sittings.

The Singing Coil Book Cover

And thanks to my recent fascination with the genre, I wrote a cozy sci fi short story, “The Singing Coil.”

Unlike the stories I’ve mentioned above, which generally focus on robots in the future, “The Singing Coil” is more of a space fantasy set on an ancient, retrofitted space station.

A salvage seller, Harte, is trying to figure out why their favorite food synthesizer has started making strange noises (which is scaring away their customers). As they interact with the other station regulars, they realize that its distorted noises might actually be an ancient lullaby… one that leads them to an unexpected connection to their past.

On the cozy scale I’d rate it closer to A Psalm for the Wild-Built, with slice of life vibes, but at a pace closer to Automatic Noodle. So if you liked those books but want more space station trappings, give “The Singing Coil” a try!

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Get your copy of “The Singing Coil” from your favorite online retailer:

Amazon (US) | Amazon (UK) | Apple Books | Barnes & Noble | Google Play | Kobo | Smashwords

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Happy reading! 📚

P.S. Are there any cozy sci-fi books you’d recommend?

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💫 ~ The Singing Coil – New Release ~ 🎉

Hey all, I am super excited to announce that my latest short story, “The Singing Coil,” is now available at most major online retailers! 🎉

In case you haven’t been following my recent posts, “The Singing Coil” is a stand-alone short story (no cliffhanger!) in an all-new cozy sci-fi universe.

(Me? Have fun worldbuilding and create a new sandbox to play in? Never…)

Anyway, if you want something like Legends & Lattes, but in space, this is for you.

The Singing Coil Book Cover

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Sometimes a broken machine sounds like home…

Harte runs a salvage shop on Crossroads Station, a bustling hub where dozens of alien species live, work, and bicker over burnt coffee. But when their section of the station mysteriously empties, Harte discovers the culprit: a food synthesizer emitting a bone-rattling hum that’s driving customers away.

The synthesizer is singing. And Harte recognizes the melody: a lullaby from their Vyraenar homeworld, one they haven’t heard since childhood.

Now Harte must trace the distorted melody’s origins through decades of maintenance records in order to restore the commercial ring’s harmony and, in doing so, forge a friendship they didn’t know they’d been missing.

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Get your copy of “The Singing Coil” from your favorite online retailer today!

Amazon (US) | Amazon (UK) | Apple Books | Barnes & Noble | Google Play | Kobo | Smashwords

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Here’s what reviewers have said so far…

“…a hopeful tale about people making their home in space.” ~ Dave Higgins

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Read “The Singing Coil” today!

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Happy reading! 📚

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An Early Plant Beast Render

Many, many Distant Horizon Universe newsletters ago, back in early 2019, I had a poll for which Distant Horizon beast subscribers would like to see me try to render in Daz.

Keyword being “try” to render, because I was still learning the program and uh… even my drawn attempts to create beasties hadn’t been that great.

At the time, I had a lot fewer assets to work with, and a lot less practice with morphing the figure’s features to get the desired look.

Anyway, with a lot of Photoshop post-processing…

This was my take on a plant beast “candid shot” caught in the wild by a rebel photographer.

The image was inspired by this section from Distant Horizon, where Jenna sees a picture of a plant beast for the first time:

The image had been taken in a jungle, with thick ferns and tall trees spiraling around the frame. It focused on a vaguely humanoid creature. Thick, woody vines wrapped around its hands, twined across its shoulders, and curled around its collarbone. The vines rested loose against its bare chest. The creature—male—was naked, with pale, green-tinted skin and a thicker brow. Like the beast we’d seen in the security feed, this one had cat-like eyes and pointed ears.

Anyway, there you have it!

First attempt to create a Distant Horizon beast in Daz.

Should I give it another go sometime, try a then and now?

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Discover what the Camaraderie doesn’t want the Community to know exists in the Distant Horizon…

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✨ ~ The Singing Coil has its first review!

Want a little more of a peek into “The Singing Coil?”

Dave Higgins has written up a comprehensive review! (I always love reading his reviews and his insights.)

Check out the review at his blog post below:

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Pre-Order “The Singing Coil” today and get it as soon as it goes live on February 17th!

Amazon (US) | Amazon (UK) | Apple Books | Barnes & Noble | Google Play | Kobo | Smashwords

Sometimes a broken machine sounds like home…

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Happy reading! 📚

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